August 17, 2010

what makes you sad?

What makes you sad?

  I feel sad when i saw people in all around the world suffered from natural disaster. And now, China, my own country, and my friends in China, is suffering from debris flow.  Many people died and others were injured badly from the previous Sichan earth quake. Youngsters like me had lost their parents and friends. I had view some picture online, its about a 8years old boy and his sister 3 years old, had lost both their father and mother. They had no relatives in the world anymore. And the little boy need to take care of his young sister, he is just a  infancy boy who do not even know how to take care of himself. But now, he need to look after his little sister, while others childs were playing, hes feeding his sister, i cry badly while reading the new article.
  I feel that i am so lucky that live in a safe place like Singapore. No disaster and it is peace. I feel guilty. I felt sorry about them, the little boy are so innocent, with his sister. Both were still so young, why do they need to suffered this kind of horrible disaster? Not only them, there were still many other child that had suffered from the disaster. I feel so sad to know the facts that millions of people had lost their home, and millions of people had died.
  Personally, I donate some money to the Chinese Embassy. Althought it is very little amount of money but i really want to do some things to help them. And from the deep of my heart, I would  grieve over the unfortunate people. I wish people will stop suffering from the natural disaster.

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August 2, 2010

situational writing

31 August 2010


Teens knocked down in Hit-and-Run Incident

By HanYin

A 18-year-old girl with her boy friend, age 21, both from NANYANG POLY Technique was hospitalized Tuesday morning 9am after they were hit by a car Monday night 1am, along WOODLAND WEST ROAD, when they were on their motocycle.

31 July 2010, a couple from NANYANG POLY technique was driving along WOODLAND WEST ROAD leading their way home. When they were knock down by an unknown car. They were both injured badly.

26 years old, Mrs Jane Tan, an eye-witness of the accident said: “It happened so fast! She was also sure that the driver was drunk.

46 years old, inspector Abdul Rahman said, “There were stream of blood on the road!” He was shocked by what was left of the motocycle.

Mdm Moliah Bte Ismai, 36 years old housewife who was one of the passengers in one of the cars, said, “All I heard was a big bang!” She was unsure what caused the accident.

Inspector appealed to the public for information about the Hit-And-Run driver. Bystanders were urged to come forward with information on the license plate number of the vehicle involved in the hit-and-run accident.

He also added that drivers should not drink and drive, the hit-and-run drivers will not escape and the police will continue working on case to find out the criminal.